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Post subject: Zombie Eclipse!  Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 11:15 am |
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made this in my free period at school, kinda like it   comments are welcome:)
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 11:41 pm |
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Interesting, like the concept. Maybe remove the shadow off the character.
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 7:04 am |
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I don't really like the shadow, the text, and the blurred splatters. Change those a bit, and I think it would look very nice!
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:24 pm |
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Looks like you need the Colour Wheel.
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:28 pm |
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ok thank you for the tip! i wanted these colours to stand out from one another and to be in contrast with the zombie image so thats why i choose those colours.
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:40 pm |
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jaksje wrote: ok thank you for the tip! i wanted these colours to stand out from one another and to be in contrast with the zombie image so thats why i choose those colours. Doesnt have to look ugly if you want your colours to contrast. When choosing colours you should take into consideration what compliments what and which colors would suit the concept. And btw, since your zombie is black, everything would contrast with it. You didnt have to choose the ugliest colours just the make it contrast.  Also, the soft shadow around the zombie is slightly annoying to look at when its put next to all the solid splatter brushing. Overall, its a decent novice piece and with some work you could turn out to be quite a nice artist and addition to the AC.
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 7:14 pm |
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thnx for the tips all of you, editing tomorrow
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 3:22 am |
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That zombie is really bad, I'd just redo it and smooth out the edges.
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:24 am |
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 Tried again, I edited the zombie so that it is sharper, and adjusted the levels of the colours. I'm not so good with colours ... i dont really know how to use that wheel of colour. Anybody care to explain? Thanks for the tips
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 4:51 am |
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Ok the color wheel, the colors across contrast etc. I'm not sure how to explain it, someone else could lol. the text still isn't too great, the zombie I would say is too sharp, but that's just my opinion. the splatters look unnaturally blurred, but it's an improvement
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 6:27 am |
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I think it looks pretty cool, but the "title" isn't well portrayed. A zombie eclipse kinda makes you think of a ton of zombies deterring you from seeing, well anything.
So, a single zombie in front of color splats doesn't really make sense when paired with the title of "Zombie Eclipse." Choose a better fitting name or a better fitting design, and it will be tons better in my opinion.
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:03 pm |
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the zombie silhouette doesn't really match with the splat pattern. I'm sure there's a right combination of paint splatters that would complement the figure but this is not it. Also, as someone mentioned, the colors - it looks like you just chose them at random. The text: the style would be more ideal for a chalkboard/dark background - the complete opposite of this one. Example of a good Silhouette piece:  Looking forward to further improvement. It's not a bad starting point and I'm pretty sure you'll find progress in your work later on.
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 5:08 pm |
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im going to leave this as it is for a bit, because otherwise i start ruining all of it thanks for the comments and i will keep them in mind
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:15 am |
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Lacks a lot of depthh
and the colors...god-dayum
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:59 pm |
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apart from just about everything else mentioned above. jaksje, use png's. All the images you ever make are in very lossy jpeg's D:
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 6:39 pm |
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poehalcho wrote: apart from just about everything else mentioned above. jaksje, use png's. All the images you ever make are in very lossy jpeg's D: mm weird didnt really notice until you mentioned it
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 10:29 pm |
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rek wrote: poehalcho wrote: apart from just about everything else mentioned above. jaksje, use png's. All the images you ever make are in very lossy jpeg's D: mm weird didnt really notice until you mentioned it lol, couldn't help but notice. I like high quality . Even if the content is shitty (take medium offence, jaksje), I'd at least like to view it in high quality.
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:27 pm |
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rek wrote: poehalcho wrote: apart from just about everything else mentioned above. jaksje, use png's. All the images you ever make are in very lossy jpeg's D: mm weird didnt really notice until you mentioned it U can clearly see it on the first pic under the right armpit.
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Post subject: Re: Zombie Eclipse! Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 4:40 am |
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omier44 wrote: rek wrote: poehalcho wrote: apart from just about everything else mentioned above. jaksje, use png's. All the images you ever make are in very lossy jpeg's D: mm weird didnt really notice until you mentioned it U can clearly see it on the first pic under the right armpit. yes yes
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