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 Post subject: Charge@!
PostPosted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:42 pm 
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C&C, I'd like to know how I handled light, text and shadows ;D
note: bandana is handdrawn :P (except pattern and skull)

this was my source image
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 Post subject: Re: Charge@!
PostPosted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:47 pm 
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light is off.
bandanna looks ok
Bunny looks burnt. hes way off to the side as well. (keep in mind most ppl scan from left to right)
no tonal balance. colors are kinda screwy.

Just do what I did and still do - Ignore text.

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 Post subject: Re: Charge@!
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light is off.
bandanna looks ok
Bunny looks burnt. hes way off to the side as well. (keep in mind most ppl scan from left to right)
no tonal balance. colors are kinda screwy.

Just do what I did and still do - Ignore text.


D:
that's like the opposite of what I was expecting to hear :soosad:

so how can I improve? what's wrong with the light and colours?
also, mind giving it a grade :P? it helps me judge in what way it might be wrong.

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 Post subject: Re: Charge@!
PostPosted: Mon Mar 07, 2011 4:49 am 
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I don't want to sound harsh but: C-

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The bunny and that sun are also fighting for attention.
maybe if you put the bunny on top - that might help.

I guess the colors are alright - I myself just don't like them.




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 Post subject: Re: Charge@!
PostPosted: Tue Mar 08, 2011 1:07 am 
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C- is being a bit forgiving.

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 Post subject: Re: Charge@!
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For someone who doesn't do sigs a lot, I think you did a decent job with it. Yes, Shamori did hit a lot of spots but I think it has its appeal. Reminds me of Kung-Fu Ragdolls from PS3. lol

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 Post subject: Re: Charge@!
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no one mentioned corner text?

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 Post subject: Re: Charge@!
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no one mentioned corner text?

I tried various positions, but I could really find any better spot. I tried without it as well, but then it just looked empty :soosad:
I was aware of the imperfection so instead I tried to turn down the opacity somewhat, so it doesn't stick out too much.

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 Post subject: Re: Charge@!
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Oh shit.. this bunny is so frickin creepy. xD

Well, the background somehow doesn't fit. Really!

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too red perhaps?

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 Post subject: Re: Charge@!
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Well, Just do it.. xD

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