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Anh_Hung_Rom
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Post subject: untitled poems Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 9:22 pm |
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I would love to take the credit but I roughly translated from a Vietnamese song.
I climb blindly
But not over this sadness
I search blindly
But only found disappointment
My youthful dreams I haven't fulfilled
My life's goals are still illusive
Have I wasted my years with the nonsenses?
I'm longing for a day of sastisfaction
What purpose do I serve?
Surrounded by sadness and disappointment
Where is the joy?
Once you lost it
You learn to appreciate
Once you feel pain
You learn to love
After winter mud the sun is brighter
After tough times life offers lessons
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Last edited by Anh_Hung_Rom on Thu Dec 14, 2006 11:06 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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Priam
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 10:29 pm |
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Key-J! this has your name all over it!
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RuYi
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 10:38 pm |
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Lol, don't tease him.
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Priam
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 10:42 pm |
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wasn't meant to tease him :o
more like something that's on a subject he recently had to deal with, pain etc.
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Anh_Hung_Rom
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 10:51 pm |
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LOL
I was eating lunch at work. humming the song and I thought I'd share that.
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Priam
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 10:53 pm |
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Anh_Hung_Rom wrote: LOL
I was eating lunch at work. humming the song and I thought I'd share that.
idd,
it has really nice lyrics, ofcourse we haven't heard the tune yet
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Suppaman
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 12:16 am |
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lol that brought a tear to my eye, but it actually made some sense to me. Ahh its good to read a good poem once in a while. Thx rom.
bTw: im starting to post here more now cuz its such a good enviroment in the OTL. Good pplz too.
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Anh_Hung_Rom
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 5:17 pm |
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From a different poet
Let's talk about life
After I cease to exist
What is there to bring
Into the afterlife?
But emptiness, lonliness
Dearest Thuy my love
Like a kingfisher
On the tree of hundred years
I seek the love I've lost
In the puddle of life
In the puddle that is life
Dearest Thuy my love
Let's talk about life
Love is a blade
Love is a dagger
Silently and sweetly
Splitting the first love
Where's my Thuy?
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Last edited by Anh_Hung_Rom on Wed Dec 13, 2006 7:18 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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MonstaH
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 6:56 pm |
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uhm I read "untitled porns" ... dang <.<
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Anh_Hung_Rom
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 9:29 am |
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Kindly make your exit pls. There's no porn here but a sad guy.
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Key-J
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 9:35 am |
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RuYi wrote: Lol, don't tease him! It's a nice poem, Rom, I like the words. Cool you translated it!
Hahha dont be mean im sure he didnt mean to "tease" me right?
Well hes not wrong tho, i could see how that relates to me. Especially the 2nd and 3rd stanza
But nice poems dudes
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 4:04 pm |
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Songtext I like as well;
Savin' Me - Nickelback
Prison gates won't open up for me
On these hands and knees I'm crawlin'
Oh, I reach for you
Well I'm terrified of these four walls
These iron bars can't hold my soul in
All I need is you
Come please I'm callin'
And oh I scream for you
Hurry I'm fallin'
Show me what it's like
To be the last one standing
And teach me wrong from right
And I'll show you what I can be
Say it for me
Say it to me
And I'll leave this life behind me
Say it if it's worth saving me
Heaven's gates won't open up for me
With these broken wings I'm fallin'
And all I see is you
These city walls ain't got no love for me
I'm on the ledge of the eighteenth story
And oh I scream for you
Come please I'm callin'
And all I need from you
Hurry I'm fallin'
Show me what it's like
To be the last one standing
And teach me wrong from right
And I'll show you what I can be
Say it for me
Say it to me
And I'll leave this life behind me
Say it if it's worth saving me
Hurry I'm fallin'
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Anh_Hung_Rom
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 4:44 pm |
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I like the tone. Thx for sharing snudge.
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Anh_Hung_Rom
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 5:01 pm |
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Yet from another poet/song writer.
What dust became me
So one day, I'll become dust
Beautiful, glorious dust
The sun has shined
On my indulged life
What forrest with leafless limbs
Has heard a welcoming call
But dust that is my fate
Written ink will be erased
Gone is forgotten
For all the years of indulging
Suddenly the hair is white
Faded leaves are falling
A hundred years to meet death
One day
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Blackchocob0
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 9:34 pm |
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Sounds like the writer plays an MMO like Silkroad.
EDIT: They are excellent poems though. I like them. But ya, the first poem seemed like they were questioning what they got out of the time they put into their MMO.
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 9:58 pm |
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I got an A+ for this one:
I once wrote a poem
but it was bad
I once wrote a poem
but it didn't rime
I once wrote a poem
but I didn't had an idea what it meant
I once wrote a poem
just because I had to
I once wrote a poem
AAH SCREW THIS, I'M GOING HOME !
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RuYi
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 10:52 pm |
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I found this one in the closet of my grandmother, and I really liked it.
When you get what you want in your struggle for self And the world makes you king for a day, Just go to a mirror and look at yourself, And see what that man has to say.
For it isn't your father or mother or wife, Whose judgment upon you must pass; The fellow whose verdict counts most in your life Is the one staring back from the glass.
He's the fellow to please, never mind all the rest. For he's with you clear up to the end, And you've passed the most dangerous, difficult test If the man in the glass is your friend.
You may fool the whole world down the pathway of years. And get pats on the back as you pass, But your final reward will be the heartaches and tears If you've cheated the man in the glass.
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Anh_Hung_Rom
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 11:06 pm |
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I like it. Simple, honest. Your grandpa made that?
and it rhymes, like a poem should, unlike mines.
I guess I could try to bend the words to rhyme but it would lose the original meaning.
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RuYi
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 11:42 pm |
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No idea who made the poem, it's probably on the internet also.
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Blackchocob0
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 1:43 am |
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Anh_Hung_Rom wrote: I like it. Simple, honest. Your grandpa made that? and it rhymes, like a poem should, unlike mines. I guess I could try to bend the words to rhyme but it would lose the original meaning.
A poem doesn't need to ryhme. Not in any way, shape, or form. I didn't know we had people who appreciated writing. I'll post some of the poetry I've written - which is kind of alot. And make some new one's. TBH my writing is comparable to or better than the ones posted. Not that they are bad.
But ya Ahn, if poetry were limited by such a large, vague, and general rule...it would be far less meaningful. In fact it would kinda suck.
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Anh_Hung_Rom
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 3:05 am |
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you're right. but I like it when a poet makes the wording rhyme seemlessly as if he/she wasn't even trying. I like good use of semaphores too.
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