NSR~ Flute woman

izmeister · **Joined:** Feb 2008 **Posts:** 1138 **Location:** Yes

I plan on entering this on the next sig war since Verfo already announced his choice for a topic. I tried working on depth, but..meh

CnC please.

Please tell me how I can improve it.

rek · **Posted:** Wed Feb 04, 2009 10:24 am

Face is way too bright, compared to the rest on the tag. It looks kinda bland, did u have.. like a layer of black on really low opacity?

Lighting is off. Background looks boring. Maybe you could look up some tutorials on dA and some gfx sites.

Kirkaldi · **Joined:** Jul 2008 **Posts:** 3083 **Location:** nyc

rek wrote:

Face is way too bright, compared to the rest on the tag. It looks kinda bland, did u have.. like a layer of black on really low opacity?

Lighting is off. Background looks boring. Maybe you could look up some tutorials on dA and some gfx sites.

u are so harsh :twisted:

izmeister · **Joined:** Feb 2008 **Posts:** 1138 **Location:** Yes

Kirkaldi wrote:

rek wrote:

Face is way too bright, compared to the rest on the tag. It looks kinda bland, did u have.. like a layer of black on really low opacity?

Lighting is off. Background looks boring. Maybe you could look up some tutorials on dA and some gfx sites.

u are so harsh :twisted:

I would rather harsh then nice. Or some vague mix of both that you always seem to do -.-

rek · **Posted:** Thu Feb 05, 2009 7:31 am

izmeister wrote:

Kirkaldi wrote:

rek wrote:

Face is way too bright, compared to the rest on the tag. It looks kinda bland, did u have.. like a layer of black on really low opacity?

Lighting is off. Background looks boring. Maybe you could look up some tutorials on dA and some gfx sites.

u are so harsh :twisted:

I would rather harsh then nice. Or some vague mix of both that you always seem to do -.-

Sorry if it sounded harsh, didnt realise at the time.

<3

Melez · **Posted:** Thu Feb 05, 2009 10:33 am

izmeister wrote:

Kirkaldi wrote:

rek wrote:

Face is way too bright, compared to the rest on the tag. It looks kinda bland, did u have.. like a layer of black on really low opacity?

Lighting is off. Background looks boring. Maybe you could look up some tutorials on dA and some gfx sites.

u are so harsh :twisted:

I would rather harsh then nice. Or some vague mix of both that you always seem to do -.-

Yeah that's true. I really like when people point out what's bad, doesn't matter if they sound harsh or not, instead of saying "cool border, kiu!"

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