NSR <> New Sig <> 2 Versions

Swindler · **Posted:** Tue Jan 15, 2008 8:52 pm

A new sig again ^^
v.1

v.2

C'n'C ty

fena · **Joined:** May 2007 **Posts:** 4441 **Location:** Life

In my humble opinion, the color one definitely looks better.
It's a nice tag, actually. But there are still a few things that I think could be done better.

First of all, the fire that the dragon is blowing out. The part that's spilling over the sides of the other dragon's breath just doesn't look too great. On top of that, it seems to be transparent. Not saying that transparency is a bad thing, but I think it's just a little overly transparent.
Secondly, the wings of the dragon that's spitting the fire look a little fake. You have some thing overlapping it / on it, and it just doesn't look too great.
And thirdly, I'd like to point out the text. Try some new fonts. It seems like you're using the same fonts alot of the time. And work on the placement of the text as well. Even if you wanted to tilt it, I don't think the angle you tilted it at was too great. Experiment with your font. Look at tags that HOLLA and BrokenSaint make - they have some incredible font there.

Swindler · **Posted:** Tue Jan 15, 2008 9:06 pm

ty fena for the comment <3 i can erase that part over his wing. and i actually dont use the same fonts all the time.. but gonna try to find new ones

fena · **Joined:** May 2007 **Posts:** 4441 **Location:** Life

HejsaN wrote:

ty fena for the comment <3 i can erase that part over his wing. and i actually dont use the same fonts all the time.. but gonna try to find new ones

What I mean is that they look very similar. If you didn't know about the site yet, try dafont.com. They have quite a bit of fonts, and it's easily usable.

Also, if you have the time, go through this tut. It doesn't take long, but it gives you a good brief understanding on how to play around with your font on Photoshop.

http://www.tech-gfx.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=3009

Swindler · **Posted:** Tue Jan 15, 2008 9:11 pm

which tut

fena · **Joined:** May 2007 **Posts:** 4441 **Location:** Life

What? Huh?
Look at my post again. Your eyes must have not seen it when you read it the first time. The link's been there the entire time. I swear it! :d

TwelveEleven · **Joined:** Mar 2007 **Posts:** 3806 **Location:** Heaven

Here gotten by simply quoting:

http://www.tech-gfx.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=3009

Here

Swindler · **Posted:** Tue Jan 15, 2008 9:18 pm

ty and i swear

it wasnt there before ;D

fena · **Joined:** May 2007 **Posts:** 4441 **Location:** Life

You jest, good sir. :p

HOLLAstir · **Joined:** Aug 2007 **Posts:** 1637 **Location:** 206

I agree, I'm leaning towards the colored version. Couple things I noticed: You have your renders going from right to left, looks like the fire breathing one is chasing the other. Then your c4d/brushing is going from top left to bottom right. Seems to clash rather then add flow. Generally tilted text to that extreme never looks too well. As for the rest, I agree with fena.

Faiien · **Joined:** Oct 2007 **Posts:** 889 **Location:**

dragon renders are too sharp imo
background is blah
text is pretty bad
but your improving gj

WaX · **Joined:** Sep 2007 **Posts:** 659 **Location:**

Background a lil chaotic for me, i'm lookin at c4ds running in different directions so my eyes are all over the show. Could do with a il tidying up. Defo improvement tho, keep at it

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