Rizla wrote:
I hate popouts. Widening a focal point outside the flow of a piece is never a good idea. When doing a popout the only thing that should pop out are things other than your focal. I think the background is o.k., but dont fit your focal at all. Text is ick imo, first priority with text is readiability, when you skew it or type it along a wavy path you lose alot of it. 4/10.
Nice selection on your render though, if you did it.
After doing the render I didn't have much inspiration left

. Anyways i know the bg totally doesn't fit with the render.

. I'm not really good in making it a dark bg. Maybe you can help me? Here's the render.
Giving it a new go myself tomorrow anyways.