Looking better. Still, a few things:
First of all, your text isn't much better. It's more obscure, and hidden - which is a good thing - but this time, it's MUCH too hidden. The font is white, against a light-colored background, making it almost invisible. Most of the times, you want your font to not be the
focal point, but still be the second thing that the viewer looks at. I had to struggle to see the font; at first, I thought it was another clipping mask.
To get a font color that matches your Sig, you could just make your text a clipping mask as well. While you're trying out all those clipping masks, you might want to try that. See how it looks.
Other than that, I think it looks pretty good. But her eyes
do look a bit freaky.
~ And on a side note, you don't have to keep on creating threads, you know. You can just edit your first one with your new versions, hehe. Just thought that I'd point that out.
