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Well are you there? Maybe lurking somewhere? So anyway i felt that this was the right place to post this because Poetry is a form of art in it's self.

Anyway here's a sample of mine that I've just written. In my opinion it's just not my best poem. So here it it is it's titled Good Morning.

Good Morning

Good morning Silence,
Good morning to myself.
Good morning to the pain in the center of my chest.
Good morning to another day filled with anger and sorrow.
Good morning Hope,
You've finally broken me down.
Good morning Disappointment,
I've been feeling you lately.
Good morning Misery,
Your company I've felt for too long.
Good morning Ignorance,
You've led me astray.
Good morning Independence,
or is it Lonelyness?
Good morning Shame,
You're killing me from the inside.
It isn't a good morning after all.

I love poetry and the feelings and emotions that come with it. I liked yours. Interesting concept and the use of the word "good morning." Feel free to post any other poems you've written <3

I know it's not Ac but still it has some work from SRF members.

http://www.silkroadforums.com/viewtopic ... ight=poems

Thx will do.


Here is one that I did like a week ago. It's titled Pain.

Pain

I'm in pain right now.
Not that physical pain,
But that emotional pain,
That cut's through my heart like a sharp knife.
This pain I've experienced one too many times.
this pain is so sharp and overwhelming,
but the funny thing is I brought this upon myself.
After so many times youd think I know better,
But I keep repeating the same mistake.

Here's one of mine:

Apologize

Lets write these words
Deprive them of all emotion
Lets write them for those we love
write these words inspire devotion

Though I’m unable to deem apathetic
Unable to stifle the tidal wave of pain
Lets write life anew, turn fresh a new pageWipe away these tear shaped stains

You’re a beautiful labyrinth, a compelling enigma
Yet one I Know I must escape,
So now, I must take my leave, always remember this stay
I apologize that this had to end this way.

So let’s not dwell on this past
Forget all these late years
Return with apologies
With roses and fresh tears

But know that life moves on
Stay not too long my son
And when the moment comes
Run my love run

You’re a beautiful labyrinth, a compelling enigma
Yet one I Know I must escape,
So now, I must take my leave, always remember this stay
I apologize that this had to end this way.

So here I go, embark on this life anew
I’d venture out on this journey, thinking of you
But knowing that it was time to let go
The best chance of one day, coming home.

@fena

not my style of Poetry bu I love it. wish my poems where written like that but using all those words gives me a headache. My poems are just short, straight to the point and sweet and I think that's why people like my poems alot. But great job anyway, I love and admire your style of poetry.

I used to write some back in the days, but I haven't tried lately. And since English isn't my native tongue mine aren't understandable for most of you I'll see if I can't find one of my best and I'll try to translate it (it's a 6 page long poem I made for my grandfather's funeral)

Wow fena, I'm impressed. That was really beautiful! *tear* <3

Thanks, StuckUP! The thing is, my poetry is more intended to be a song. If I had a voice, I'd sing it and record it. But my standards are high, and unless I can get someone with an amazing voice like Taylor Swift, I'd rather not do anything with it at all. For the time being, I just write for the sake of pouring my emotions out.

Here's another one that I wrote recently. Been going through a bout of slight depression recently over a girl.



All The Same Fight

I try to say I love you
Yet in never comes out right
I don’t know what I can do
I feel I’m losing this fight

A fight with no winner or loser
Yet competitive we remain
If there no war outside
Why are we losing in disdain?

This fight I cannot affect of change
I’ve given it my all
Yet it’s not enough, my doubtful fears
Fear of my downfall

A fall into this shallow depression
That seems to grip my mind
Devoid of love, devoid of life
Leave everything behind

Behind with no backward glances
Your love has pushed me so
When the time comes, when it’s right
Will I be able to say no?

No to your apathetic proposition
To redeem yourself from this fall
Work your wily charms on me
I’ll try to give it my all

Give it my all to maintain my dignity
Escape with a hint of pride
Stay abstinent from your charms
This I must soon decide

Decide that I wish to move on
Decide that I will remain
But now I’m thinking back
Aren’t they both the same?

that one is more my style.

Ode to AC
Because I am bad
At poetry, I wrote a
Haiku, not an Ode.

And that's how I got out of poetry class in High School >.>

Sadistic indeed. Very nice poems and I would like to hear more.