NSR zane (hell kaiser)

cin · **Posted:** Sat Mar 29, 2008 9:35 pm

i like all xcept looks like most of the focal is blurry.

try blending it in by mixing stock+bg, not just blurring :]

HOLLAstir · **Joined:** Aug 2007 **Posts:** 1637 **Location:** 206

Work on flow and depth. My eyes are going everywhere on this piece, too much going on.

BrokenSaint · **Posted:** Sun Mar 30, 2008 12:35 am

yeah, looks too busy. don't go crazy with the tech brushes.

Color choice is good though keep it up

0l3n · **Posted:** Sun Mar 30, 2008 12:38 am

Never really liked tech sigs because of whats stated here. Focal is usually messed up due to the "tech".

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