in that second sig and even in your revised version u have the same prob
when ur using gauss blur in a duped layer and then erasing try not to make it stick out so much. try to blend it in so its not like " HAI I ARE ERASED AND THAT PERSON ARE BLURRED "
also try to get a smoother render for sumthin like that, that one seems so... sharp x_x.
Your text drives me away from what i'm supposed to be looking at, i'm caught trying to read the tiny and difficult to read font as opposed to the sig that i should b appreciating.
the first one aint 2 bad but square isnt a turn on for me
