NSR~Love Hewitt

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

V1

V2

V3

lavapockets · **Posted:** Mon Mar 23, 2009 4:19 pm

I definitely like the colored version better...the colors are a great mix together. Also, the B&W loses a bit of depth on the right side.

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

Ya but..... it's so pink lol.

lavapockets · **Posted:** Mon Mar 23, 2009 4:30 pm

DumboDii wrote:

Ya but..... it's so pink lol.

lol...you could always tone it down. Drop the sat a bit and then mess with the curves.

Tasdik · **Joined:** Jan 2007 **Posts:** 13206 **Location:** Life

I like the second one better. The first one is..."to pink"

lavapockets · **Posted:** Mon Mar 23, 2009 4:32 pm

Boys and their "it's too girly" nonsense

Rock the pink.

Tasdik · **Joined:** Jan 2007 **Posts:** 13206 **Location:** Life

lavapockets wrote:

Boys and their "it's too girly" nonsense

Rock the pink.

Luls

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

I agree that colored one is slightly better but B&W version is more manly ^^

Melez · **Posted:** Mon Mar 23, 2009 7:02 pm

Color one is better imo. Use some burn tool, get some contrast in the black/white version and it will kick ass as well.

0l3n · **Posted:** Mon Mar 23, 2009 7:09 pm

Everyone who think pink isnt manly is gay.

Just beware of the penguin, he likes pink and he doesnt like to be called girly.

Anyway, I like the coloured one slightly more just because the b&w one looks so bland.

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

0l3n wrote:

Everyone who think pink isnt manly is gay.

Just beware of the penguin, he likes pink and he doesnt like to be called girly.

Anyway, I like the coloured one slightly more just because the b&w one looks so bland.

Sorry penguin. Pink suits you. Im just too low to use that kind of color. Forgive me !! :cry:

Made a new one. Dunno if it's any better.

Melez · **Posted:** Mon Mar 23, 2009 7:40 pm

Use it a bit on her face, to make shadows. ;d

Or stay with the color one, it's still better imo.

lavapockets · **Posted:** Mon Mar 23, 2009 7:47 pm

0l3n wrote:

Everyone who think pink isnt manly is gay.

Just beware of the penguin, he likes pink and he doesnt like to be called girly.

Anyway, I like the coloured one slightly more just because the b&w one looks so bland.

buahahaha beware the pengy :love:

If you really want to de-pinkify it, drop the sat a little, use a soft brush, set it on color and choose a nice blue or purplish color....experiment with it. I still say F-it and keep it as is though. Pink = the seks.

0l3n · **Posted:** Mon Mar 23, 2009 10:05 pm

V3 looks way better than V2, theres more going on in it.

Priam · **Posted:** Tue Mar 24, 2009 8:11 am

Stick with the colored one, very pretty. The right render as well. I also like the 'grungy' lines in the pink background, makes up for the empty space perfectly. The color mix below her face finished it, great one.

8/10 for me.

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

Happy now ?

0l3n · **Posted:** Tue Mar 24, 2009 3:20 pm

DumboDii wrote:

Happy now ?

Yes!
PINK RULES!

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

Good : D I was wondering if I'd finally make my very own tutorial but maybe I'll leave it for the future and better sigs.

Hostage · **Posted:** Tue Mar 24, 2009 4:25 pm

DumboDii wrote:

Good : D I was wondering if I'd finally make my very own tutorial but maybe I'll leave it for the future and better sigs.

Right.

There is no point in making a tut just to pass on your own bad habits to beginners who are still learning themselves, it's not productive for anyone. It's usually best, and considerate, to make tutorials when you yourself can obtain a class of "solid moderate" or higher before you even considering teaching others. By that time you can be confident in your skills, know your way around-and can explain-most if not all the tools. That's what really counts when making tutorials--explanation of the tools and the different way to use them, the sig is just there for visual aid along the way.

Right now I'd say you're resting somewhere between solid novice to high novice. You're sigs seems to fluctuate between the two atm so just focus on bettering yourself before worrying about others.

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

Hostage wrote:

DumboDii wrote:

Good : D I was wondering if I'd finally make my very own tutorial but maybe I'll leave it for the future and better sigs.

Right.

There is no point making a tut just to pass on your own bad habits to beginners who are still learning themselves, it's not productive for anyone. It's usually best, and considerate, to make tutorials when you yourself can obtain a class of "solid moderate" or higher before you even considering teaching others. By that time you can be confident in your skills, know your way around-and can explain-most if not all the tools. That's what really counts when making tutorials--explanation of the tools and the different way to use them, the sig is just there for visual aid along the way.

Right now I'd say you're resting somewhere between solid novice to high novice. You're sigs seems to fluctuate between the two atm so just focus on bettering yourself before worrying about others.

Haha thanks. Ya you are right. In this case it's more polite to be little selfish.

Miguez · **Joined:** Nov 2008 **Posts:** 5003 **Location:**

Hawt. :3

lavapockets · **Posted:** Tue Mar 24, 2009 11:20 pm

Hostage wrote:

DumboDii wrote:

Good : D I was wondering if I'd finally make my very own tutorial but maybe I'll leave it for the future and better sigs.

Right.

There is no point in making a tut just to pass on your own bad habits to beginners who are still learning themselves, it's not productive for anyone. It's usually best, and considerate, to make tutorials when you yourself can obtain a class of "solid moderate" or higher before you even considering teaching others. By that time you can be confident in your skills, know your way around-and can explain-most if not all the tools. That's what really counts when making tutorials--explanation of the tools and the different way to use them, the sig is just there for visual aid along the way.

Right now I'd say you're resting somewhere between solid novice to high novice. You're sigs seems to fluctuate between the two atm so just focus on bettering yourself before worrying about others.

oooh ooh do me next! I need reviews

.Banshee · **Posted:** Tue Mar 24, 2009 11:58 pm

I love the colored version. Don't change the colors because that tag is so rockin that pink, if it looks good, it looks good PERIOD. Don't change it for other people.

cin · **Posted:** Wed Mar 25, 2009 12:12 am

lavapockets wrote:

oooh ooh do me next! I need reviews

i bet you're great :roll:

/naughty

lavapockets · **Posted:** Wed Mar 25, 2009 4:17 am

cin wrote:

lavapockets wrote:

oooh ooh do me next! I need reviews

i bet you're great :roll:

/naughty

bad kitty

cin · **Posted:** Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:47 am

sowwie

lavapockets · **Posted:** Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:34 pm

cin wrote:

sowwie

ehehehe

And yay! I can post again!!

TheComedian · **Joined:** Mar 2009 **Posts:** 32 **Location:**

hmm, i'd give it around 6/10, but it's just my opinion. here's my critique though:

well, first of all, nice pick of colors, they do work good together, but that small patch of grey on left of her shoulder is not very seksy. The double/triple line at the bottom isn't either, in my opinion. The right side of it is real nice i find, everything gets along well with each other, but the left one...can't say it. Especially the whole part left of her shoulder, it's like all cut to pieces. Maybe you could just blurr it a bit, and add something that acts as a link between the patch of pink an the left and the model on the right. ( a small curving yellow line would probably do the trick ) As for the bottom...the double/triple thing really shouldn't be there. Although i loved how u placed your theme word, i think it would have been better off on the right, somehow connecting it self with the arrows. In my opinion, when u have a subject that has arrows pointing to the right corner...it's not good to put the word that summarizes the pic on the left...it kinda looks lost there.

About that patch of pink, although the color truly has a lot of potential in that pic, you don't use it, why not? it doesn't need much, a line here, some light there, a blurr on the corner, and that's it.

Because if not, it acts as background, but there is nothing on the front so it's like...what was supposed to be there?

Well, yeah that's what i had to say about the color picture, just trying to help ya improve yourself man.

I know how it sounds , coming from someone who has 12 posts on the forum...10 of which are in the game section, but again, it's not like i wanna be mean...just commenting on the pic.

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

TheComedian wrote:

hmm, i'd give it around 6/10, but it's just my opinion. here's my critique though:

well, first of all, nice pick of colors, they do work good together, but that small patch of grey on left of her shoulder is not very seksy. The double/triple line at the bottom isn't either, in my opinion. The right side of it is real nice i find, everything gets along well with each other, but the left one...can't say it. Especially the whole part left of her shoulder, it's like all cut to pieces. Maybe you could just blurr it a bit, and add something that acts as a link between the patch of pink an the left and the model on the right. ( a small curving yellow line would probably do the trick ) As for the bottom...the double/triple thing really shouldn't be there. Although i loved how u placed your theme word, i think it would have been better off on the right, somehow connecting it self with the arrows. In my opinion, when u have a subject that has arrows pointing to the right corner...it's not good to put the word that summarizes the pic on the left...it kinda looks lost there.

About that patch of pink, although the color truly has a lot of potential in that pic, you don't use it, why not? it doesn't need much, a line here, some light there, a blurr on the corner, and that's it.

Because if not, it acts as background, but there is nothing on the front so it's like...what was supposed to be there?

Well, yeah that's what i had to say about the color picture, just trying to help ya improve yourself man.

I know how it sounds , coming from someone who has 12 posts on the forum...10 of which are in the game section, but again, it's not like i wanna be mean...just commenting on the pic.

Great post. Thank you. It is good to get critiqued by someone who knows what he is talking about.

Hostage · **Posted:** Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:19 pm

TheComedian wrote:

I know how it sounds , coming from someone who has 12 posts on the forum...10 of which are in the game section, but again, it's not like i wanna be mean...just commenting on the pic.

You're not judged by the amount of your posts but more so by the quality of your posting. I just peed myself happy seeing we have a new AC poster and he's not bound to the posting habits of "9/10 smexy!!!!!!!". I look forward to seeing one of your own thread in here, now if you'll excuse me I have to change my pants.

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