Feedback on a song + added a less noisy song

Gnarly · **Joined:** Oct 2009 **Posts:** 567 **Location:** Nigras

Yo dudes, dudettes
Me and my friend made a beat(but in a different way) and we'd like it if you guys could give us some feedback. We both just started making music so don't expect much.
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Ok this was the second thing we made the same day. It's different than the one above.
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Less noise? Again some feedback would be nice

Thanks in advance =)

Mindy · **Joined:** Apr 2009 **Posts:** 654 **Location:**

A pretty boring song as instrumental.

Otherwise i got no comments.

Gnarly · **Joined:** Oct 2009 **Posts:** 567 **Location:** Nigras

As instrumental i meant, no vocals. Like a beat. My bad.
Well thanks anyway =)

poehalcho · **Posted:** Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:25 pm

I don't think going malfunctioning Aphex Twin is the best way to start.

there's no harmony in the song whatsoever. Random tones don't always mix well. too much repetitiveness in some parts as well...

[SD]Master_Wong · **Posted:** Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:28 pm

its shit sounds like random sounds your radio might pick up if you remember the old radios with the dialing knob

and saying dont be harsh is like saying please dont tell me im shit at what i do but you are allowed to comment on what i do.

harsh comments push people forward

poehalcho · **Posted:** Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:30 pm

[SD]Master_Wong wrote:

its shit sounds like random sounds your radio might pick up if you remember the old radios with the dialing knob

and saying dont be harsh is like saying please dont tell me im shit at what i do but you are allowed to comment on what i do.

harsh comments push people forward

get off srf if you wanna do your work -.-
in fact, go to safe mode without internet options, so you can just use word and finish what you got.

Gnarly · **Joined:** Oct 2009 **Posts:** 567 **Location:** Nigras

Yes i know. We're both open for critics, we both have no experience to little experience in making music. And you're totally right with the harsh comment push people forward thing. Gotta start somewhere huh?
Thanks for the comments

[SD]Master_Wong · **Posted:** Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:47 pm

poehalcho wrote:

[SD]Master_Wong wrote:

its shit sounds like random sounds your radio might pick up if you remember the old radios with the dialing knob

and saying dont be harsh is like saying please dont tell me im shit at what i do but you are allowed to comment on what i do.

harsh comments push people forward

get off srf if you wanna do your work -.-
in fact, go to safe mode without internet options, so you can just use word and finish what you got.

im doing a paragraph then surfing so i dont go braindead bored

Squirt · **Joined:** Jan 2008 **Posts:** 8186 **Location:**

Keep your day jobs.

Gnarly · **Joined:** Oct 2009 **Posts:** 567 **Location:** Nigras

Squirt wrote:

Keep your day jobs.

How supportive! Thanks =)
Dont be afraid it's just an hobby.

aznronin · **Joined:** Jun 2008 **Posts:** 1393 **Location:**

It's the effort and well trying that counts!
But I can't really say that it's good...

inky · **Joined:** Nov 2006 **Posts:** 4025 **Location:**

Bjork on meth, locked inside a musical instrument storage room.

It sounds like something you'd use for sound effects for a video/show.

Gnarly · **Joined:** Oct 2009 **Posts:** 567 **Location:** Nigras

Yea, well it's been an experience for us.
Anyway im gonna get some sleep.
Thanks for the comments

Pally · **Joined:** Mar 2007 **Posts:** 412 **Location:**

I have to say, if this is just a start its pretty decent/good.

It does need more though. But I'm not really going to bash it to hell because its actually decent for a start.

Draquish · **Joined:** Mar 2006 **Posts:** 6423 **Location:** ____

It sounds just like it. - Feedback.

Miguez · **Joined:** Nov 2008 **Posts:** 5003 **Location:**

It's actually pretty nice for an amateur; Keep it up

Deadsolid · **Joined:** Dec 2007 **Posts:** 1789 **Location:**

That's not music. That's noise.

Ganja · **Joined:** Sep 2009 **Posts:** 1494 **Location:**

Deadsolid wrote:

That's not music. That's noise.

+1

Crowley · **Posted:** Mon Dec 07, 2009 6:25 am

Deadsolid wrote:

That's not music. That's noise.

Couldn't have said it better myself.

evilpeta · **Joined:** Feb 2006 **Posts:** 895 **Location:** ...

lol you all got trolled, he was obviously asking for more feedback sounds to be added to his feedback compilation in the first post. amirite?

Melez · **Posted:** Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:26 pm

Deadsolid wrote:

That's not music. That's noise.

There is a region of music called 'noise' or 'noise rock' which I am a great fan of. Critics deem it to be the highest form of experimentation and avantgardeness, but some people see it as random and pointless jamming...
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Listen to it from about from 3:20 and forward. That's noise.

For the threadstarter, I'd say I like it. Sounds a bit like Aphex Twin but experiment more, I like the 'idm' beat.

0l3n · **Posted:** Mon Dec 07, 2009 1:19 pm

Lolwut?

Either they are all deaf or they were all dropped from a balcony when they were young.
That sh1t is worse than death metal and screamo rap. I get more enjoyment from listening to the static on my radio.

chickenfeather · **Posted:** Mon Dec 07, 2009 1:46 pm

It sounds pretty merzbow to me
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Gnarly · **Joined:** Oct 2009 **Posts:** 567 **Location:** Nigras

0l3n wrote:

Lolwut?

Either they are all deaf or they were all dropped from a balcony when they were young.
That sh1t is worse than death metal and screamo rap. I get more enjoyment from listening to the static on my radio.

Are you talking about the song me and my friend made, or about the noise rock song?

poehalcho · **Posted:** Mon Dec 07, 2009 4:50 pm

2nd one's beats are too random. try time 'em right.

chickenfeather · **Posted:** Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:00 pm

The second one start off with something that sounds remotely like an arabic tune on a guitar and it moves on to sounding like a mosquito approaching the right ear. Then I hear a fog horn sound that fades away. The beat is very erratic and does not mesh well with the rest of the song.

0l3n · **Posted:** Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:26 pm

RoqueWelle wrote:

0l3n wrote:

Lolwut?

Either they are all deaf or they were all dropped from a balcony when they were young.
That sh1t is worse than death metal and screamo rap. I get more enjoyment from listening to the static on my radio.

Are you talking about the song me and my friend made, or about the noise rock song?

The noise one.

CeLL · **Posted:** Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:39 pm

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dom · **Posted:** Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:47 pm

Sorry, but it sounds like in both "songs" (sound clips?) that you're trying to be artistic and innovative but have fallen extremely short.

asusi · **Joined:** Jul 2008 **Posts:** 3223 **Location:**

this is beat, not song try to make something behind the beats, all i heard is beats

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