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Darkness lay down the path that we cannot see;
Wonder and amazement abound to be.
For this darkness holds new beings and things;
Terrible, insipiring, miraculous and evil.
Demons and creatures and spirits roaming free;
To tell me, what do they see in me?
Ragged, barren, unrestrained madness and insanity;
In every consciousness rests entirety...
The whole of the universe and its incomprehensible nature.
They whisper to me without words and I see,
The unfathomable and more still unbearable mind inside of me.


...And down I sink into monstrous lunacy
Never to return as me.
For now that I know and see...
The devil is inside of me.

Lol I havn't written much these past couple years, but I used to write alot. I'm out of practice...and no poetry does not have to fucken rhyme bastards.

But is sounds heck of a lot better if it does

Impressive!

I've played all my cards
And that's what you've done too
Nothing more to say
No more ace to play

» The winner takes it all
» The loser standing small

But tell me does he kiss
Like I used to kiss you?
Does it feel the same
When he calls your name?

» The winner takes it all
» The loser has to fall

That's the Abba song.

double post >_>

really o_O? meh im sorry i dont listen to abba T_T i used it in a veeery old forum

I lol'd.

I have some really good ones that I actually published under an alias ill post em up here once I get @ home. As the only copies are on my home comp

Well I didnt want to quote the entire poem, it looks too cluttered and I hate that but really I thought the entire poem was quite nice... not funny...

Draquish if you don't like my poem you could straight up tell me rather than be passive aggressive about it.

Oh and also let's see you write something better.

Oh and if you put so much stock into rhymes, you have a shallow outlook on the meaning and purpose of poetry. But hey you're only 15 or whatever, you'll find out.

O_o Nonono...I liked it.

It's just that when I 1st read what she posted I found it funny.

I'm a person that likes to play around w/ people. ^_^

PS: It would sound better if it rhymed

I know it would. But keeping the meaning and theme I had in mind in play while also making everything rhyme would have turned a 30 min project into at least a few hours.

And sorry for over-reacting.

My Girlfriend

My girlfriend is nice.
My girlfriend is sweet.
My girlfriend wouldn't cheat on me, if I'd just let her be.
My girlfriend is the greatest person, I've ever got a chance to meet.
But sometimes I have insecurities.
When I see another guy, hugging my sweet pea.
What I feel is anger, and sometimes jealousy.
Should I confront her? Or just let her be?
Forget it, in the end, I know she wants to be with me.
If she cheats, then it wasn't meant to be. And if she's loyal, then I would have to agree.
That my girlfriend is the greatest person, I've ever got a chance to meet.





^_^

Time
That slithering, slimy, dirty onslaught,
Like a festering wound, relentlessly coursing onward.
Momentum carried like the waves of the sea,
Stinking and blood-filled, it crashes and envelopes;
Smashing, rending and tearing through its course.
Time...
My fear of darkness.